backpack-chan - I Need a Doctor (100% Gameboy Remastered)(♥ω♥ ) ~♪

Hiii um this is my first time posting here~! I used to make music on lsdj when I was in high school and I randomly got the urge to start making it again.
Please tell m what you think of this song c: Any tips on how I can improve in the future?
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